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when hope dies
when love’s lost
when Walls fall
when bread costs

when children fight
and then cry
when parents promise
but lie

when there’s nothing left
and the sky burns
and Fate sobs
and the tide turns

then it’s time and past
in this thunder
to give in, rest –
just surrender
©2008-2010 ~dreaminstories
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Author's Comments

I really love this piece. :boogie: Please let me know what you think, I don't mind if you don't like it. I just had to say how much I, personally, love this one. ^^; Anyways, enjoy! :heart:

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:iconitalia-grunge:
outa all yer work, i think this is my favorite of your pieces

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i lie in bed, and in my head, a voice says i'm insane

I am Alice Cooper in dA's Celebrities Crew!
:icondreaminstories:
I'm so glad you like it! :blushes: Goodness. Thankies for the luverly love and the :+fav: too! =D :heart:

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Why are the penguins eating Fruit Loops on top of the refrigerator? Again? >.<

Actually, how did they get up there in the first place...?
:iconitalia-grunge:
yer EXTREMELY welcome =D

i may be sounding too repetitive, but i'll say this again. you're an AMAZING writer

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i lie in bed, and in my head, a voice says i'm insane

I am Alice Cooper in dA's Celebrities Crew!
:icondreaminstories:
:blushes: It's fine. I really don't mind. ;p My self-confidence has been a little low lately and you are the meds my doctor prescribed, apparently! :giggle: :glomp: :heart:

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Why are the penguins eating Fruit Loops on top of the refrigerator? Again? >.<

Actually, how did they get up there in the first place...?
:iconitalia-grunge:
daw! yay! =D

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i lie in bed, and in my head, a voice says i'm insane

I am Alice Cooper in dA's Celebrities Crew!
:iconqweenxxbee:
This kind of strikes me as reminiscent of By the Waters of Babylon.
Kind of brings to mind the idea of a viscious fate driven cycle of the rise and fall of civilization....
and more relevantly...the recent economic instability?
I dunno...the inevitability of it all? Thus the "surrender".
It's quite revolutionary in some ways really....that peace might be acheived not by overcoming destiny, but by succumbing to the dissolution of hope.
WOO!! i'm wordy XD...but still.
=] My dear...you inspire inspiration at every pen/key-stroke...
:iconqweenxxbee:
inspire inspiration. tehehe i need sleep.
:iconlyoko-awichi:
I TOLD YOU SO!

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It springs out of the fabric, like a flower. It looks... it blooms out like a flower. Frank knows... he's seen it.-Gerard Way

think about it.
:iconitalia-grunge:
...you did?

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i lie in bed, and in my head, a voice says i'm insane

I am Alice Cooper in dA's Celebrities Crew!

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